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Hi Khizer.
ReplyDeleteWow you have written a very interesting story about Arnie the Doughnut.
I'm glad Mr Baker found Arnie and you created a happy ending to the story.
I also like your picture you have drawn at the end of the story.
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Snook.
Khizer, I am so glad that Arnie made it back to Mr Baker at the end of your story. I was a bit worried that he might have been eaten!
ReplyDeleteMr G
Hi Khizer
ReplyDeleteI am really glad your story had a happy ending and Arnie got back to Mr Baker before he was eaten. I love the language you have used in your story like, "he hopped of the bed quietly...." Your descriptive words make it very easy for me to picture your story in my head. I hope Mr Baker looks after Arnie well.
From Petra
Hi Khizer,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing this on the Blog - I was a little concerned when Arnie got into Mr Bing's car because he can't see over the steering wheel, but thankfully it all ended well, which was a relief!
And, like Petra, I just love happy endings!
Have a great afternoon.
Mr W.