Hi Kereru! Makoto wrote and decided to type out his finished story...
Once when I was in the park, I saw a duckling escaping from ridiculous chickens on bicycles. I threw cookies and doughnuts to distract the chickens. Then the duckling stole my skateboard and teleported to a mystery location.
Hi Makoto.
ReplyDeleteWow I really enjoyed reading your very funny story.
What a great imagination you have. You used amazing ideas in your story.
I also love that you wrote and then decided to type your story.
Well done, keep up the great work.
Mrs Snook.
Hey Makoto
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story. Well done on also publishing it.
Mr G
Well done Makoto on a very creative story. It did make me smile, imagine if we could teleport, where would you want to go?
ReplyDeleteAnna
I love this story Makoto and I'm impressed you used all the words. I would love to be able to teleport, it would mean I could visit my family in Germany much easier. Who would you visit, if you could teleport to them?
ReplyDeleteFrom Petra
HI Makoto,
ReplyDeleteI've enjoyed reading your published story. I like how you have shown us the process you used by first writing the draft and then the following step in publishing it.
I think you have used good humour with the story too. Tino pai!
Have a great day.
Mr W.