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  1. PetraAugust 29, 2021 at 6:34 PM

    Hi Reine
    Thank you for your story and thank you for underlining the words so that I could see you have used them. I love your story. Good job!
    From Petra

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  2. jsnook@wigramprimary.school.nzAugust 29, 2021 at 7:48 PM

    Hi Reine.
    You have created a great story.
    Keep up the good work on your blog.
    Mrs Snook.

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  3. Marc GibsonAugust 30, 2021 at 9:15 AM

    Hey Reine
    What a great story. Well done on using all the words. I wonder what mess the chickens would leave at the Donut shop?
    Mr G

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  4. Brian WalkinshawAugust 30, 2021 at 9:19 AM

    Hi Reine,
    I've enjoyed reading your lovely story about the Chicken and the Kiwi and I especially like how you have used onomatopoeia with lots of sounds in the story.
    I am also impressed just how neat your handwriting is, which makes it easy for the reader to read. Great idea underlining the nine words as well. Did it take you long to write the story Reine?
    Have a great day.
    Mr W.

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  5. Fiona LunanAugust 30, 2021 at 10:37 AM

    Hello Reine
    I hope you and your family are keeping busy in lockdown. I am also impressed by your neat writing and speech marks to show a conversation in your story. What else have you been doing at home?

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