Shreya’s story

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  1. Nikki GrimwoodAugust 30, 2021 at 2:28 PM

    WOW Sherya!!! What wonderful writing, keep up the good work. I miss your smiling face!

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  2. PetraAugust 30, 2021 at 3:07 PM

    Hi Shreya
    Thanks for sharing your story, It is fabulous. I love your imagination, especially with the bicycles, it made me laugh a little bit. I'm not sure I would want to be teleported to Auckland at the moment. If you could be teleported somewhere, where would you like to go?
    From Petra

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  3. Marc GibsonAugust 30, 2021 at 4:07 PM

    Teleported to Auckland. Maybe not at this time!
    Great writing my friend. I really loved how you have used all 9 words.
    Mr G

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