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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Great story Skye. I spotted all 9 words.
ReplyDeleteMr G
Well done Skye, I found all nine words in your story.
ReplyDeletePetra
Hi Skye - thank you for sharing your story featuring all of the nine words required in this task.
ReplyDeleteI reckon you would have been happy that one of the nine words had to be 'skateboard'!
Have a great weekend.
Mr W.
its great i loved it when i seen it
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ReplyDeleteWhat a great story using all the nine words! It got me thinking , where I would like to teleport to?!
What shop did you teleport to? I really like how you drew your picture at the top of your story, it caught my eye. Well done Skye.
Anna
Hi Skye.
ReplyDeleteI loved you story. How clever using all nine words.
I know you would have had a big smile on your face when you saw 'skateboard' was one of the words that you could use in the story.
Keep up the great work you are doing.
Mrs Snook.
i really liked it that skateboard was one of the words
DeleteOlá Skye (and family) . Interesting story Skye- I can see you are editing your writing too. What tricks can you do on a skateboard? I hope you get to use the skatepark again soon.
ReplyDeletei can ollie and pivot and manual lots of others. i like skateboarding with my dad at the skate park
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