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Great story Olivia. I spotted all 9 words.
ReplyDeleteMr G
Well done Olivia, I found all nine words as well.
ReplyDeletePetra
Hi Olivia
ReplyDeleteThat was a great story . I really liked the part where the chicken and ducklings were playing on the skateboard .
Have a good weekend
Anna
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ReplyDeleteHi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteNice story using all the nine words, were you have managed to get your story flowing along, weaving each word in quite cleverly. I can imagine your character, Ella, saying how ridiculous it was to see a chicken and a duckling playing on a skateboard!
Have a great weekend.
Mr W.
Hi Olivia.
ReplyDeleteGreat story and how clever using all nine words.
I hope those chickens and ducklings were being kind to each other, sharing the skateboard!
Keep up the great work. Have a great weekend.
Mrs Snook.