Zoey’s Story

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  1. Mrs Caisee LoyeAugust 30, 2021 at 1:55 PM

    Hi Zoey, I really like your story. The boy was so lucky getting doughnuts and cookies before bedtime! It was clever how he jumped on his bike and rode away to escape the farm. Do you have a bike? I wish I had a bike, they're fun and a great way to exercise! From Mrs Loye

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 2:02 PM

      Hello Mrs Loye

      Thank you for your comment. I do have a bike it is black and pink. Maybe you can ask santa for a bike.

      Zoey

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  2. PetraAugust 30, 2021 at 2:59 PM

    Hi Zoey
    Great job using all the words in your story. My family and I have been doing a bit of bike riding during this lockdown, have you been bike riding at all?

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 2:03 PM

      Hello Petra

      Thank you for your comment. I do have a bike but I have been using my scooter for our walks.

      Zoey

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  3. Marc GibsonAugust 30, 2021 at 4:04 PM

    Hey Zoey - Well done on using all 9 words. What an imaginative story!
    Mr G

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    1. AnonymousAugust 31, 2021 at 2:05 PM

      Hello Mr G

      Thank you for your comment. It was a fun story to write.

      Zoey

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