Zoey's Wonderful Island

on
Here is Zoey’s letter to persuade visitors to her island. She also decided to read it out, and made a video.






Comments

  1. Marc GibsonAugust 27, 2021 at 2:51 PM

    Oh Zoey I would love to come to your island. Juice and snacks plus I would get to watch some big birds!
    Thanks for sharing. It was great to hear you reading your writing.
    Mr G

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2021 at 12:48 PM

      Hi Mr Gibson

      Thank you for your comment. The juice is apple and nectarine.

      Zoey.

      Delete
  2. PetraAugust 27, 2021 at 2:56 PM

    Hi Zoey
    I would love to come to your island and learn some more about the birds that you have there. I also love the idea of the hot springs. What is the best way for me to get to your island?
    Petra

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2021 at 12:49 PM

      Hi Petra

      Thank you for your comment. The best way is a boat but you can take a plane too.

      Zoey.

      Delete
  3. Brian WalkinshawAugust 28, 2021 at 11:54 AM

    HI Zoey,
    What a good idea to show us your piece of writing and then read it well to us as well.
    You read it very clearly and used some good expression in persuading people to visit your island.
    I love freebies so I'm certainly in for the free boat ride there and please book me in for the hot springs and waterfall viewing as well. Can you give me an indication of what the cost for these will be please?
    Thank you Zoey and have a great weekend.
    Mr W.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2021 at 12:52 PM

      Hi Mr Walkinshaw

      Thank you for your comment. The hot springs and waterfall are free for everyone to enjoy.

      Zoey

      Delete
    2. Brian WalkinshawAugust 31, 2021 at 5:02 PM

      Okay - thanks for that Zoey. I will definitely be booking in.
      Mr W.

      Delete
  4. AnnaAugust 28, 2021 at 2:05 PM

    Hey Zoey
    Your island sounds very cool indeed. I'd love to come too please. The juice and snacks sound great and how awesome having hot springs and a waterfall too, lots to do there !
    Anna

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2021 at 12:53 PM

      Hi Anna

      Thank you for your comment. You can come to my island it is very fun.

      Zoey

      Delete
  5. jsnook@wigramprimary.school.nzAugust 28, 2021 at 10:20 PM

    Hi Zoey.
    Your island sounds amazing, I would definitely like to visit it.
    What a great idea you had to make a video of your story.
    Have a great weekend.
    Mrs Snook.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. AnonymousAugust 30, 2021 at 12:55 PM

      Hello Mrs Snook

      Thank you for your comment. I like making videos of me reading. Writing my story was fun.

      Zoey

      Delete

Post a Comment

To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.