Three little pig story by Kanaad

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  1. jsnook@wigramprimary.school.nzSeptember 2, 2021 at 11:29 AM

    Hi Kanaad.
    Well done writing your exciting little pigs story.
    Keep up the good work you are doing.
    Mrs Snook.

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  2. AleashaSeptember 2, 2021 at 11:37 AM

    Hi Kanaad,
    I really enjoyed reading your Little Pig story. I love how you used your exclamation marks to express when the wolf was angry or yelling. Thanks so much for sharing :)
    Aleasha

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  3. Marc GibsonSeptember 2, 2021 at 11:42 AM

    Hey Kannad. What a great story you have started. I am really interested to see how it goes for him at the next little pigs house. Is it wrong that I feel bad for the wolf?
    Mr G

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  4. PetraSeptember 2, 2021 at 11:57 AM

    Hi Kanaad
    What a great story, I love that you have used your imagination to make your own exciting three little pigs story. I am excited to hear the end.
    Petra

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  5. AnnaSeptember 2, 2021 at 12:51 PM

    Hi Kanaad
    I am super impressed with your story! It kept me entertained , I like the idea of your trap too, well done. Keep up the great work.
    Anna

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