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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Chloe
ReplyDeleteI don't think I would like to be a pirate. I feel I would miss land and not always moving.
Thanks for letting us know why you would like to be a pirate. What would your favourite treasure be?
Mr G
Hi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteWould you really like to be a pirate and sail the seven seas on your pirate ship the 'Jolly Warrior'?
I am relieved to read you haven't got a wooden leg nor a hook for a hand and i don't believe for a minute that you would steal any treasure to share with your mateys!
But that's the great thing about writing stories . . . you can use your imagination and take the reader on a journey wherever you like.
Well done Chloe, you built a great picture up in my mind - Ka pai!
Have a great day.
Mr W.
Hi Chloe, it is so lovely to see your beautiful smile.
ReplyDeleteI would love to join your pirate crew on the Jolly Warrior and help you sail the seven seas to find the treasure. Just like Mr W, I am very glad that you do not have a wooden leg or a hook for a hand. I would love to hear more about what treasures you and your crew have found.
Hi Chloe, great work! I liked to read that you would share the treasure with your 'mateys'! What treasure would you like to find?
ReplyDeleteGreat illustrations. Thanks for sharing with us!
Mrs Walker