Two short stories - the cows of yourst and the jar o doom by Archie:)
invisible cows that hunt you and if you don't feed them wheat you will get the dreaded river of milk
THE JAR O DOOM 🏺
about mr.hi and he finds a stash of ingredients in his basement and drinks one...
Hi Archie,
ReplyDeleteWow you have been busy with your writing, and what great writing it is. You have started your writing exactly the way we do in our writing at school. I love both your stories. Did you enjoy writing them? Where did you get your ideas from? Awesome work Archie
Mrs T
Hi Archie.
ReplyDeleteWow you have been really busy writing 2 Stories.
Gee you would have to be very careful when feeding the cows that you didn't bang into them or step in there cow pats (I guess the pats would be invisible too).
I can just picture that river of milk.
Wow I wonder what is going to happen after mr.hi drinks that ingredient in the basement!
I like the drawings you have included. What can we expect next on you blog!
Mrs Snook.
I love reading your stories Archie, I love your imagination and how your writing helps me to picture what is happening in my head. You have used such great descriptive words and I was left in suspense. The drawings you have included a very cool. I hope you will keep sharing your writing with us.
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Hi Archie. i have missed your writing during this time. Thanks for sharing. Great use of imagination.
ReplyDeleteMr G
Hi Archie,
ReplyDeleteWhat great titles; The Cows of Yourst and the Jar o Doom.
Even just the titles made me want to read more and already I was looking forward to your imaginative writing. I really enjoy your onomatopoeia Archie. - keep up the writing.
Have a great afternoon,
Mr W.
ReplyDelete:) thanks for the great comments, im planning to do like a news story today and post it on the blog. See you in the quiz later, im also planning to do more writing soon. Have a great afternoon
-Archie :D